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Post by Rogue on Nov 25, 2005 12:07:27 GMT 1
I thought, let's make a story totally fantasy-based. No rules, exept that no one makes it a porn story.. *boys'll be boys*  You can use ALL of the fantasy elements, it would even be fun if you introduce an already famous personage.. Something like Frodo and thorgall fighting a dragon together  Let's get it started!! Here we go: On a beatiful day, a young girl walked down the road, looking for flowers. When she had already an arm full of flowers, a stranger came walking by. Dark clouds seemed to ovethrew the sky where he walked, and two bloodred looking eyes stared into the young girl eyes.. |
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Post by Snowdrop on Dec 1, 2005 16:03:09 GMT 1
((Cool idea!))
... Eventhough teh girl was scared she tried to be calm. She bit her lip when the man came closer and took a flower form the many she collected that day. The man broke the gaze and stared at the flower. All of the sudden the flower was surrounded with some red lights and colored dark brown. It died...
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Post by Rogue on Dec 2, 2005 15:46:43 GMT 1
And then the dark man came closer till the girl couldn't see the sky anymore..
Everything became dark...
The next day the young girl still wasn't returned. Her brother named Yueng wondered where she'd stayed and went out to look for her. When he arrived at the flower field, he saw a dark circle in the middle of the flowers. All the flowers growing there had a black surface and when he touched one, in fell in cinders.. Yueng started to be nervous; his sister was in trouble, that was for sure!
But what could he do??
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Post by sephiroth on Dec 2, 2005 17:41:00 GMT 1
He started to look for clues of what had happend to his sister and where she had been taken.
While he was tracking down the footprints of the unknown attacker something swiftly ran past him wich caused him to fall over.
When he stood up again and wiped the mud of his face, the strange creature that passed him was standing right in from of him. It had some human characteristics, but still looked very different of any man he had ever seen. The creature introduced itself with a deep moaning voice
"I am Kaarvath, protector of these woods. You must listen carefully. Yesterday your beloved sister was taken by an evil, far more dangerous then anything you've heard of before. There is only one way to save your sister, and it must be done quickly or else these entire forest will be destroyed, including your village."
Yueng, who was still impressed by the look and sound of Kaarvath, replied with an weeping voice "what must i do? please tell me protector. i'll do anything to just have my sister back"
"Listen" Kaarvath raged "this is not only about your sister. Her kidnapping is part of a far more greater plan of evil, and you are the only one who can stop it, but is is necessary that you make a great sacrifice. Are you willing to do that?"
"I... I... Yes, I Will do anything !" answerd Yueng selfconfident.
"This will not be an easy task for you, but you must...
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Post by cinder on Dec 15, 2005 19:05:26 GMT 1
(may I join in?)
From no where a shiver ran through each leaf, flower, living thing. Kaarvath abruptly stopped talking and the silence grew deeper. His eyes seemed to stare into oblivian. "Not here..." he whispered "we must not speak here..."
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Post by Rogue on Dec 19, 2005 15:00:15 GMT 1
There's danger everywhere now your sister's gone...
Your sister is in possession of something she doesn't know. She can be dangerous if she uses her gifts at a wrong case!
Now, let us go to my house, it's a place no one can enter unless he has recieved my permission.
Karvaath en Yueng went by, and arrived at a huge tree. Karvaath layed his fingers on a branch of the tree and immediately the leaves startd to swing. Without even a whisper of noise a portal appeared, and Karvaath stepped through.
Yueng quickly followed him, although he was a little scared.
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 24, 2006 6:49:17 GMT 1
Yeah this if fun  When Yueng took a step in the direction of the portal, his hart was beating fast and went trough the portal. He was overwhelmed with a bright light, so bright he couldn't keep his eye's open. When he reopened them, he saw a huge room, he had the strange feeling that he was in a bubble under water. His fright was confirmed when he saw a school of fish swam by the wall. Yueng was petrified to see that such place could exist under water. Karvaath approached him and told him never to reveal the existence of this wonderfull place. Come my friend i have something to show you He took Yueng to the centre of the room where a big orb was, he spoke some incantations and there was image forming in the orb. The image showed a dark place filled with monsters, goblins. Every tree, plant had died in that place, no sign of live was there. |
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Post by jedi knight on Oct 24, 2006 15:16:40 GMT 1
hah now just some drawings with the story and u can make a comic serie
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Post by *Doofuz* on Oct 24, 2006 16:54:54 GMT 1
I'm a 'wannabe' comic artist (yeah, let's put it that way...good enough)
If this thing gets finished and turns out to be a decent story, I'm willing to have a go at transforming it all into a comic book.
Since I always have problems coming up with my own stories,
this might just be perfect...
Anyways, give it some thought and keep the lines comin'!
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 24, 2006 17:36:43 GMT 1
Please i'm dying to discover the next part of the story;D
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 25, 2006 6:41:34 GMT 1
Ok i'll do another part but if this story turns out to be a best-seller i will keep it all to myself  Yueng was desolated when he saw a place as sad as this. There was nothing left, he couldn't imagined that a place like this could exist. That is the home world of the fiend who kidnapped your sister. It's a lost realm long forgotten about that used to be a wonderful place like a garden of Eden but was annihilated by HIM. It once was could EL'aurien, but now there is NO name who can be given to this desolated world. Listen good Yueng your task wil NOT be easy. . . . |
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 25, 2006 6:43:25 GMT 1
By the way little POP QUIZ, is there someone can tell me where i took the name El'aurien ?
I'm curious to find out ;D
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Post by cinder on Oct 25, 2006 10:23:38 GMT 1
I can't promise any literary quality, but here goes nothing:
"Kaarvath, started to talk, explaining a great quest, but then noticed Yueng wasn't listening. He had been staring into the orb for a while, in disbelief such a place could exist, when a glimmer caught his eye. The focus of the image suddenly changed. Now the orb was showing something else. Chained to a dead tree, there was a tiny figure softly crying. It were those tears he saw reflecting the little light left in that place. His heart filled with anger as he saw this scene. But his heart nearly broke when he recognised the familliar face.
With a deep voice Kaarvath asked:"... will you listen now?"
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Post by megidoflame on Oct 25, 2006 15:02:27 GMT 1
What is this magic? is this happening now or is it the future? i must save her. yueng said. Keep your temper boy, you losing yourself would mean the rest of us losing our beloved world. Kaarvath said. But how can you expect a simple peasant boy like me to take this evil on? I have no power of magic, no skills at battle and the only thing i had, was stolen away by this evil being, that i do not even know the name of!
YOU, my boy, you have strenght of will, something not often seen in the human race. If you put your mind to it you can do everything, but you and i are not the only ones to go on the quest, i have arranged a small party to help us, consisting of a valkyrie archer, a dwarf warrior and an elf mage. Though we will have to collect them first. Let us go to teh forest of Mitharien, where we shall find the most skillfull archer ever to be seen in this world.
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 25, 2006 16:29:56 GMT 1
Can i least know whom we wil be fighting against? asked Yueng. Listen Yueng, about 700 years ago a creature was born named Gowron, he's a Skeksis, a creature who was an aprentice wizard, he had great talent, but also a great appetite for POWER, unlimited power. And one day he layed his hands on the NECRONOMICON, the book that his master was garding for mankind. So he poisened his master and opened the book and learned about power beyond imagination, spells that were forbidden by the elder gods. Also this powers has turned him in a foul creature witha famish for human soles. He also opened other realms to build himself an demonic army. Over the years his army has grown, his need for soles has trippled, if we don't do nothing we will be next, that's why we must stop huim NOW and FOREVER! YOU are the descendant of a great line of dragonslayers and unfortunatly also the LAST, OUR LAST hope. That's why we need a party to demolish his reign of terror once and for all. . . .  |
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Post by liessa on Oct 25, 2006 17:08:45 GMT 1
By the way little POP QUIZ, is there someone can tell me where i took the name El'aurien ? I'm curious to find out ;D Star Trek. Guinan (played by Whoopi Goldberg in the next Generation) in an El'Aurian, as is Dr. Tolian Soran (played by Malcolm McDowell), the man who killed Kirk. Great story guys, keep up the good work! |
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Post by megidoflame on Oct 25, 2006 20:56:13 GMT 1
YOU are the descendant of a great line of dragonslayers and unfortunatly also the LAST, OUR LAST hope. That's why we need a party to demolish his reign of terror once and for all. . . . i thought i said him being a peasant , oh well let's just say he's been an orphan or something. |
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 26, 2006 6:51:45 GMT 1
He's a farmer indeed, but his grand-grand-grand-grand parents were, let's say "the tradition" was lost over the years Sorry to have caused chaos in our story . . . CONGRATULATIONS on Liessa, she is the winner of the little POP QUIZ !!!!! Btw can someone tell me how to quote? |
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Post by sayashinigami on Oct 26, 2006 12:00:59 GMT 1
He's a farmer indeed, but his grand-grand-grand-grand parents were, let's say "the tradition" was lost over the years Sorry to have caused chaos in our story . . . CONGRATULATIONS on Liessa, she is the winner of the little POP QUIZ !!!!! Btw can someone tell me how to quote? The 'quote' button is on the top right in every post |
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Post by cinder on Oct 26, 2006 14:56:53 GMT 1
maybe the last dragon in Yuengs world was slain log ago, what 's a dragonslayer to do when there are no more dragons to slay??? So it is very possible he's a farmer with forgotten abilities and powers and do not forget his sister has power as well.
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 26, 2006 19:06:50 GMT 1
Don't forget that Gowron the Skeksis had stolen the NECRONOMICON from his master, wich can open other realms ( he also did for building his demonic army) if you want dragons te reappear in the story, that's a piece of cake for Gowron to summon them But i think i wil let others contribute in the story, or else i may sit down at the guest-artist table at FACTS 2007 and sign my newest novel "FANTASY OF OUR OWN" |
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Post by hadesgod1 on Oct 30, 2006 16:43:00 GMT 1
Are there no other to put their part of the story ? I can't wait to know what wil come of "our" hero |
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Post by cinder on Nov 2, 2006 20:15:54 GMT 1
seems like inspiration needs to be revived
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Post by hadesgod1 on Nov 5, 2006 19:26:38 GMT 1
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Post by cinder on Nov 7, 2006 20:23:07 GMT 1
"We must hurry, for time does not stand still." Karvaath looked deep through Yuengs eyes into his heart and soul, asking him the one question to start this adventure: "Yueng, are you ready" He didn't know the answer, there was so much he didn't know. Still he looked at the face of Karvaath, knowing a friend stood before him. He took one look at the odd globe and said: "I have to be"
It took them a while to prepare for the journey.
(it's the best my divided attention allows me to)
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